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Cats' Corners: the little HOUSE in the woods....
Where House is NEVER safe...
AIUTO! [new one-shot] 
5th-Nov-2008 01:03 pm
Seriously?

AIUTO!

 

Title:  Aiuto!
Genre:  Romance, Hurt/Comfort
Rating:  PG
Word Count:  2850
Characters:  Wilson/OFC, House
Summary:  Wilson’s in love, and even House approves.  So what could possibly go wrong?
Author's Note:  This has been unseen by human eyes since I made some major changes.  If you like it, send all thanks to blackmare , who can be a real bitch sometimes, in the nicest way possible.  If not, well, aim the rotten tomatoes in my direction, please. 

 

 

Thoughts 
6th-Nov-2008 05:47 pm (UTC)
Oh House - you of all people should know how important it is to change the tip of your cane before it gets to the point it slids out underneath you...

I love this story! It all started so nice and hopeful and House was being so careful and supportive and Wilson was making sure to divide his attention - but Sarah obviously didn't understand the importance of Wilson's family (I loved that touch!) to him. Well, her loss. And House being upset about it but trying not to show it, and Wilson picking up on it anyway, oh lovely. The ending moved me immensely (Wilson realizes that he’d found a way to give that little boy a hug, after all), poetry. Thanks so much for sharing.
6th-Nov-2008 05:51 pm (UTC)
i'm really pleased that this story's going over so well--and your comment puts a smile on my face! :)
7th-Nov-2008 05:32 am (UTC)
This was lovely—an OC with a real personality (even if it wasn’t one that was particularly pleasant in the later stages of a relationship), Wilson’s acceptance of House’s place in his family, and House’s mercurial transformations—added up to be all the little things that bring forward a smile and a happy reader. Very sweet, very touching, and just what I needed on a rainy day.


Edited at 2008-11-07 05:33 am (UTC)
7th-Nov-2008 11:27 am (UTC)
and your comment is lovely--just what i needed on an early, cold morning! thank you.
8th-Nov-2008 01:37 am (UTC)
Anonymous
Wow! That was freaking fantastic! Wow!

So, I admit I missed the header and was totally blindsided by Wilson having a relationship with Sarah, which was probably for the best. I would have thought about reading the story instead of just doing it. (Though, I should have known better since this is your story and you've NEVER posted a bad story!)

I was so into this story, the name of the shop, Wilson looking for canes. Then with Sarah it was great to see the relationships bloom (I loved how you described it), and I love how it felt genuine through 'til the phone call. At that point it hit me like a ton of bricks, I wanted to scream at the stupid bitch. I felt bad for Wilson and I felt bad for House but you saved the day with Wilson top priority being his *family*. :D

You really made me run through the emotions on this one. From happy and hopeful through the indescribable feeling you get when you know just your existence has screwed up someone's life and even fear (you need warnings: "May cause you to relive your morning experience of nearly falling, helplessly in the shower.")

But anyway, brilliant story! Thanks for posting!

8th-Nov-2008 01:43 am (UTC)
Aurgh! Somehow I ended up getting logged out but that last comment is mine :) And ignore all the typos! Sorry!
8th-Nov-2008 02:39 pm (UTC)
thanks for such a fantastic comment; what a lovely way to start my morning! glad you enjoyed the story, and believe me, i don't even see the typos! :)
11th-Nov-2008 04:16 am (UTC)
Love this. The last paragraph left me with such a big smile. I can't tell you enough how much I love your stories.
11th-Nov-2008 03:49 pm (UTC)
thanks! it was really kind of nice to write something with a little humor in it this time, and manage to make it convey something about the connection between house and wilson at the same time.
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