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Cats' Corners: the little HOUSE in the woods....
Where House is NEVER safe...
Visiting Hour (first in the HOUR series) 
18th-Jun-2007 09:37 am
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Title:  Visiting Hour
Characters:  House, Wilson
Rating: G
Genre:  Angst
Word Count:  525
Summary:  What if Tritter's vendetta had been allowed to play out?


Herein lies the angst...Collapse )
Thoughts 
18th-Jun-2007 06:31 pm (UTC)
Oh boy... You totally got me by surprise there...
WELL DONE! WOW! I'd never have thought that.

How very very sad. Especially "I know. And it's okay."

18th-Jun-2007 09:14 pm (UTC)
How very very sad. Especially "I know. And it's okay."

broke my heart to write that line, too--but this was one of those things where house and wilson literally tell me what to say, and i'm just along for they typing..
18th-Jun-2007 08:12 pm (UTC)
I thought Wilson's reassuring tone was odd... until I read the last bit. That was a great twist. Like others, I went back and re-read it with new eyes, and it was every bit as good the second time around because I could appreciate what they were each saying that much more. Bravo.
18th-Jun-2007 09:37 pm (UTC)
I thought Wilson's reassuring tone was odd... until I read the last bit.

poor, sweet wilson; always trying to comfort house. it just seemed... fitting, somehow, that he spent the short visit trying to make house feel better.
18th-Jun-2007 08:48 pm (UTC)
Ach. OMG. This HURT. And it is DEFINITELY something that could have happened. I would love to see you explore this universe more!
18th-Jun-2007 09:40 pm (UTC)
I would love to see you explore this universe more!

your wish, my dear, is my command--give me ten minutes; i'm putting up a companion piece that just... kind've... happened. go figure.
18th-Jun-2007 09:56 pm (UTC)
The twist at the end was great. Wonderful story. :)
18th-Jun-2007 10:18 pm (UTC)
Glad you liked! The companion piece, Happy Hour, just went up!
18th-Jun-2007 10:33 pm (UTC)
That twist took me completely by surprise. Damn. I thought something felt off when Wilson said, "I know. And it's okay." But damn.

This just aches something awful. And I mean that in the kindest way possible.
18th-Jun-2007 10:41 pm (UTC)
just aches something awful

for you and me both. and house. and wilson. and i'm sorry i started it....
19th-Jun-2007 12:12 am (UTC)
Oh, wow... OUCH. I spent today waiting in the jury summons room for seating on a capital murder case and ALMOST got seated. That, followed by this...wow. Talk about being hit broadside!

Mick
19th-Jun-2007 01:29 pm (UTC)
Talk about being hit broadside!

i felt precisely the same way when i awakened this morning with this scene swirling in my head, refusing to go away. sigh.....
19th-Jun-2007 12:57 am (UTC)
Good voices and the twist definitely worked.
19th-Jun-2007 01:39 pm (UTC)
Good voices and the twist definitely worked

i'm honored that you think so, and that you took the time to tell me so--thank you! :)
20th-Jun-2007 03:55 am (UTC)
Ah-this is really good. Quite a deft touch-particularly the end, and Wilson being so patient with the grumpy prisoner.
23rd-Jun-2007 11:25 am (UTC)
Wilson being so patient with the grumpy prisoner

glad you picked up on that; it felt 'right,' to me, that he'd have to give to someone all the concern he couldn't show to house.
23rd-Jun-2007 03:02 am (UTC)
did not expect that...
*sigh* You talented fic writers... how am I ever going to break from the addiction?
23rd-Jun-2007 11:27 am (UTC)
ever going to break from the addiction?

ahh, but this addiction is healthy! ;)
26th-Jul-2007 04:31 pm (UTC)
Greetings!

Ah... the wonderfullness of a Nottie Author - teasing and playing with us poor readers like that! Good on you!!! :-D

""Misplaced my copy of Emily Post's Guide To Proper Prison Etiquette."" BWAHAHAHAHA!!! Love it - such a wonderful blend of Wilson's contrite and his own warm, wonderful version of sarcasm.

Masterful switch at the end - took me by surprise, until I remembered a line. I've always wondered why Tritter pushed so hard, what dark secrets are lurking around in the bottom of his own soul. Working on my own speculation at the moment and looking immensely forward to seeing what you do with this.

Thank you for sharing!
-Katrina
24th-Jun-2009 08:18 pm (UTC)
Oh wow - so well done, not until the very last lines did I realize that Wilson's in prison... and yes, they could have beaten Tritter. Oh wow. *shudders*
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